http://cygnoir.net/2008/11/18/free-ride/ the black swan with digital wings Sun, 12 Feb 2012 18:47:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://cygnoir.net/2008/11/18/free-ride/comment-page-1/#comment-2249 cygnoir Sun, 23 Nov 2008 02:34:45 +0000 http://cygnoir.wordpress.com/?p=2033#comment-2249 Thanks, Gary. I admit that I didn't even write it as a prose poem, just a recollection of my experience earlier that day, but I am flattered that it came out well enough to seem intentional. Thanks, Gary. I admit that I didn’t even write it as a prose poem, just a recollection of my experience earlier that day, but I am flattered that it came out well enough to seem intentional.

]]> http://cygnoir.net/2008/11/18/free-ride/comment-page-1/#comment-2250 Gary Wed, 19 Nov 2008 13:19:09 +0000 http://cygnoir.wordpress.com/?p=2033#comment-2250 I like this one. Ordinarily I find prose poems too wordy (at least when I've tried to write them) and almost pretentious but the simplicity of the scene and the whimsy and subtle emotional response to it are really put forward nicely here. Good show! I like this one. Ordinarily I find prose poems too wordy (at least when I’ve tried to write them) and almost pretentious but the simplicity of the scene and the whimsy and subtle emotional response to it are really put forward nicely here. Good show!

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